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Thank you for your visits to my pieces. I learned of the Elfje form (11 words five lines) a few years ago – I turned your thought, your hiaku into an Elfje – enjoy. (My way of thanks…) Alone Watching tides Sand swallows footsteps The distant horizon remains Empty ©JP/dh LikeGeliked door 1 persoon
An English haiku; impressive!
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Thanks, Joep! And thanks for following!
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Prachtig om zoveel te kunnen zeggen met weinig woorden
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This is beautiful, Peter. You’ve caught the sound of silence…
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Beautiful text and impressive photo !
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Thank you for your visits to my pieces.
I learned of the Elfje form (11 words five lines) a few years ago –
I turned your thought, your hiaku into an Elfje – enjoy.
(My way of thanks…)
Alone
Watching tides
Sand swallows footsteps
The distant horizon remains
Empty
©JP/dh
LikeGeliked door 1 persoon