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From here, she sees the dreamy sea
hears it thunder
way back yonder:
“Do you fear me?”
Her dress is just as blue as she
its reflection
prompted action
at the party
But now, so far away is he
and she’s waiting,
contemplating:
“Don’t deceive me!”
*
Nicely done! I imagine she’ll sit there a long time…
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If it’s true love, she’ll wait forever.
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If it’s true love, he won’t let her.
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I do hope she doesn’t have to wait forever. Great poem!
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Well done.
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