Hello Peter, I do like the haiku, but I do not think it fits the prompt which says you should try to capture the rhythm of waltz… a beat of three, which I think it doesn’t … I will remove you from the linkup, but you are welcome with a new poem that fits the prompt.
Oh that is a lovely use of the prompt words. I like the words dancing on the paper inspired by your musical muse!
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Beautiful!
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Oh, yes, iti is just like that!
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Excellent!
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so cute, love it!
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Wonderful, Peter.
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A great haiku ☺
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Excellent! Such a lovely one.. 🙂
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Captivating imagery, the dancing pen! I love it!
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Een prachtige omschrijving.
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Beautiful Peter! J’adore ça! 😀
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Descriptive phrase, pen dancing on paper.
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Pen dance on paper…..I like that:)
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Very nice, Peter.
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Fab Peter, well done. Thanks also for liking my short story, Under Cover, on my author blog – much appreciated. 🙂
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I love the idea of a pen and paper waltz, Peter! i
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I think the muse is the best dancing partner!
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Great three lines!
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A lovely dance of words.
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Hello Peter, I do like the haiku, but I do not think it fits the prompt which says you should try to capture the rhythm of waltz… a beat of three, which I think it doesn’t … I will remove you from the linkup, but you are welcome with a new poem that fits the prompt.
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