When the summer was well at its height
and I couldn’t sleep cause of my heat
it was then that I saw the three moons.
Oh, the first was as bright as can be
and the second as red as red wine
on this hot twenty-second of June’s.
But the third was the brightest of all
as it shone on my love’s golden hair
and the owl cried its spooky night tunes.
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That is a clever one. What I would say is it reads so much like a ballad, I’d be inclined to challenge you to add another triptych (or two) and make a story of it.
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You know, Jane… I just might! If I do, I will post it separately.Thanks for the suggestion!
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It made me think of The Highwayman.
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I’ll have to look that one up (shame on me)
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By Alfred Noyse. It was a standard for primary school children of my generation. And a tremendous poem.
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Just found it. Interesting! Though not something I would have (been able to) read in primary school 🙂
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I wouldn’t have been able to read anything in Dutch. Ever! It’s the rhythm of The Highwayman that’s so brilliant. Like horse’s hooves galloping.
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I think I found some fitting words to finish the story. Find it at https://peterbouchier.wordpress.com/english-essays-and-poems-2/night-of-three-moons/
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I agree with Jane. I love the rhythm and the wording, and this could easily turn into a story. Beautiful take on the prompt!
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Thanks! I just might elaborate on it. Watch these pages for a separate post.
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I look forward to it=)
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I think I found some fitting words to finish the story. Find it at https://peterbouchier.wordpress.com/english-essays-and-poems-2/night-of-three-moons/
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I agree with Jane, too. I immediately thought of a ballad, and The Highwayman is a perfect example.
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